[Discussion] Ballad of the Fallen

This is a discussion thread for Ballad of the Fallen. Any criticism or ideas will be welcomed

Poastan!

Anyway, so far, I'm really enjoying the story. It's easy to read, and of course the characters are well thought out, and you can imagine the character that you use in real life doing more or less what you can imagine them doing. (If that sentence made any sense at all. O_O)

I can't wait to read moar.

I especially heard the characters' voices since I've heard them in real life before.

Excellent chapter and you had me going with all the action going on. Keep it up!

Another chapter and it was amaaaaaziiing!

I really love the way you write and it just keeps getting better and better.
Looking forward too the third chapter <3