[Discussion] FFXIII: The Sovereign War

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Let me know your thoughts here.

That was so sad. I could really empathize with the characters and the evidence of Selene and Rhapsody's relationship really got through well. The moment when the little girl turned into a Ci'eth, and Tia had to kill her was so emotional. And the choice of theme was great too. Just an excellent, emotional beginning.

What an emotional prologue! You've captured the scenes very well, especially when all the Oerbans were being turned into l'Cie and then into Ci'eth. Excellent start, I anticipate more now.

So so so sad. ;__; I'm so glad you were bugged to finish the prologue... but now of course I want more. And the song... it's still playing because I read faster than it finished, but it fits so well. You didn't make me cry yet, but I have no doubt that you will before this story is over.

Blimey I could feel the tears building up there. That was really powerful, Vikki, and I'm looking forward to more emotional scenes in the future.

And the music playing the background was perfect and fitting, really helped visualising everything that was going on, and the focus on that little girl really helped emphasize the emotion of the moment. It was perfect.