Subject: General Discussion Tue May 25, 2010 6:42 am
Feel free to use this thread to discuss the chapter, your thoughts on it, feedback, etc...!
Mitsuru Kirijo
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-05-02 Age : 31 Location : In a house
Subject: Re: General Discussion Thu May 27, 2010 2:20 am
Loved Chapter One. The chemistry between the brothers was excellent and you had some laugh out loud moments. Great relaxed start to the story. I feel nicely eased in. Keep it up.
Leilana
Posts : 8 Join date : 2010-05-02
Subject: Re: General Discussion Fri May 28, 2010 9:53 am
Thanks a bunch, Diar! :D I have both Chapters 2 and 3 up now. ^_^ If you get a chance to read them, let me know what you think.
