[Discussion]The Demon Slayer Chronicles - Dawn of The Demon Slayers
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Subeinu
Posts : 10 Join date : 2010-05-02 Age : 32 Location : Diar's Pants
Subject: [Discussion]The Demon Slayer Chronicles - Dawn of The Demon Slayers Wed May 05, 2010 10:32 pm
Feel free to discuss the chapters in this thread and please do write your opinion about it and what I can improve.
Mitsuru Kirijo
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-05-02 Age : 31 Location : In a house
Subject: Re: [Discussion]The Demon Slayer Chronicles - Dawn of The Demon Slayers Wed May 05, 2010 10:42 pm
Great job Svein. Nice start and a good length for a beginning. I loved the characters and the mysterious woman at the end is leaving me wanting more. Get writing!
Mitsuru Kirijo
Posts : 31 Join date : 2010-05-02 Age : 31 Location : In a house
Subject: Re: [Discussion]The Demon Slayer Chronicles - Dawn of The Demon Slayers Thu May 06, 2010 11:46 pm
OMG you killed Angelica. That demon attack was so unexpected, and the emotional scene was perfect. Excellent work Svein. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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